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A stray stone is pushed with a violent current from within the thick cloud, shining, piercing the head of the fated and unfortunate, Lazule rears back writhing with a cruel howl. His irises stolen turn an electric blue shade as the energy within the power crystal eats at him. Assigned its master it shimmers as if on command, the unwanted crown.
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It begins!
Cue the Ecco scream sfx. XDDD
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TUT …I had no other idea how to get this part done.
;U; This is probably the part everyone has been waiting for, wondering how Laz happens to gain a horn. And the part I dread > retarded. ;u;
It was amongst the rubble and debris, pushed out by pressure of air bubbles trapped etc. :/ That’s my logix, pfft.

It just, sorta happens without good visual drawn idea of WHERE and HOW. XD
The blood begins to clear from the water at the same time. :) As if blown away/change of scene.
Love-hate page, lol kinda this whole chapter really. Entirely is baaaad.

:bulletgreen:GOOD POINTS:
Panel 2, impact is rather nice… and horrifically painful looking-going on panel 3.
Water colour change <3
:’c My font-text decided to look nice when I resized it right…somehow.
Panel 3 somehow turned out rather nice. C:
Phins are better drawn, sorta. :p panel 3 is wonky pfft.
Bloody spurt + lighting of crystal. I like the bursting light fx coming from the crystal panel 3 and how it drags in the water with the movement of Lazule rolling in agony, frothy bubbles included

:bulletred:BAD POINTS:
I dislike panel 1. Nice idea and angle, dumbly drawn/painted, specifically the shiny blue …shinies. Lol, aura.
Panel 2, Laz is kinda dorky-bad.
Badly executed panel 3, speechy bubble over character- no no. XD but not too bad.
Not enough motion in his writhing body.
XD the crystal size is way too short compared to future, lol. Should be longer XD
The eye marking-static haunts me later as a bad idea 8C fffffffff. Super noob crap!
SFX ew!
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Atlantis © Warrior-Oji
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Mokuoo Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Psh, I see that happening all the time on animal planet XD DOLPHINS GETTING SHARP OBJECTS STUCK INTO THEIR HEADS AND THEN BECOMING A PART OF THE NARWHAL FAMILY! XD LOL

Looking very good can't wait to see what happens next :stare:

LET THERE BE JOY AND SINGING AND SHARP OBJECTS FLYING! :D
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
D: LMAO! I should hope not and that it was a joke. XD
HE WAS DESTINED TO BE A NARWHAL!

<3 Thank much! ;Db

LMFAO! X'D There will be songs aplenty, joys and sorrow... and stabby time! >:3 hurhurr.
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Mokuoo Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It was a joke ;A; I swear! LOL XD
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
X'D Stabby time will appear soon. ouob
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Mokuoo Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Moo:mwhahahaha! *rubs fins together* I seen there has been a lack of stabbing, I must correct this! C:<

XD LOL
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lazule: Aw hell no, that's my future role. >:c Lets team up!

X'D FFFFFFFFFFFFFF
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Mokuoo Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Moo: *eyes Lazule*...hmmm, well I suppose. BUT DO NOT FAIL ME!

XD
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lazule: I WAS BORN FOR GREATNESS! *Thrusts horn in face* THE VOICES IN MY HEAD SAY SO.
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D-Thessy Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
ZAS In all your face!!! :iconcoffeetardplz: LOL
Now try to sing this song [link] but with this lyric:
"Narwhal, narwhal, now Lazule is a narwhal..." XDDDD
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Zas?
XDDDDDDD LMFAO! That song I've known for ages, now I can enjoy it. :giggle:
You'll see some jokes later on it, nothing too great.

u3u To me, my baby has always been a narwhal.
Thanks!
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AlexRaccoonGlider Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So thats how he gained that crystal on his melon! A tad bit ranom but the power bestowed upon him may be worth the temporary pain ^^()
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:'D It was the best idea my brain had.
>n> The horn gives no powerz really, just enhances his sonar, he only has stab attacks and migraines. XDDDD The pain will not stop there, poor bastard is tortured.

TY.
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AlexRaccoonGlider Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
O_O Holy snap, is there anyway to get rid of it/

Also check out my DA journal, got a birthday wish for you ;3
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XDDDD NO. Why would I do that anywho? The suffering and pretty shine is too nice. |D
It has it's uses throughout. :3
I don't think unless he had help, so it stays.

O.O
Awww super thanks!^^
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AlexRaccoonGlider Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Either way, until the mission is done and the powers are spent, I wish my chars would surgically remove the crystal for him.
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XDDD You're in for a big surprise of which I will not spoil.
The powers don't dull, I'd say he breaks at some point.

No removing. :'C It's what makes Lazzie my fun baby. XD

And it's the least of his worries. :D
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AlexRaccoonGlider Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I was a fraid of that, what kind of crazy things will happen next/
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can not tell. You will see in time. c:

Hehe, evil me
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zavraan Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
YES. the magic crystal finally appeared! Attatched itself to Lazul's head! And now it's bleeding! :'D

lol

Seriously where did it came from? XD

But it's awesoem! <3 I love his expression in the second panel.
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XDDD It's not magic, really. And I wouldn't say attached itself so much as stuck and infused. /: It's not realistic without bleeding, I hate kids stories for that.

XD Read the description. Fail me
Thanks, it was pretty cool!
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zavraan Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
lol I was just kidding.XD

And I see. :3
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Duzloo Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Poor guy though :XD:
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD Aw, yeah.

I am a terrible person. |D
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Duzloo Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
No you're not :hug:
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD Sadist isn't?
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Duzloo Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Just a bit :lmao:
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BugsBunnyFanNo1 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh no! More blood :O funny thing is... i don't have a fish OC D: i only have a sea leopard OC >:I But about the comic...
1. Woooosh! Pretty pretty shiny shiny XD my sis would just grab it and put it in a ring, she's like a crow XD Dangit, you drew the diamond so amazingly! AND IT'S BLUE! *fangirl scream*
2. Lightning tears run mother buckers! i love his face, more becouse of the cherry lips o3o I would make moar comics my self, but, ehh, i'm too lazy :shrug:
3. Nyan bubbles :XD:? I ove them *must take!* I so love you're efects! Maybe just maybe, i would become a disainer and give credit to you, Rachel ;) :hug:
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
X'D There will be more alter too. o3o I don't think that matters, you don't need one for every animal existing, lol.

XDDD I hate the shape and shiny of this page, pretty badly done.
It's far too large for a ring though. D: XD Bowerbirds also like that stuff and magpies.
Bowers like blue of a certain shade, magpies like shiny.
;n; The diamond is terrible. blargh! XD This comic is based upon that blue shade jewel though, a main part of it. I love blue.

They are sparks and aura, not tears XD
I don't like his face. XD I dunno about calling it a lip, so much as his chin. XDDD Comics are so much work.

Lol. Bubbles are nice influence.
Effects are mostly hand drawn <3 A what Disainer? o.o Designer? XD

>.> I don't so much use my name on the net, I prefer Oji. XD
Thank you for paying great attention!^^
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BugsBunnyFanNo1 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yah, i heard about the bowerbird ;p i'm just like him, i like only light blue, raccoons love shiny things as well :D
Nuuuuuu, don't blame the shyiness! D: it's purrfect! <3
Aura from his eyes? LoL XD
I like bubbles o3o BUBBLES! XD
try drawing something amzing in ms paint with a mouse, >:I
And yah, a designer XD i fail at speling </3
What does Oji means? :?
I am a lithuanian, paying is what we do
good thing i didn't have to pay for commenting XD
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD I am more alike them too.

:c No, is ugly shiny.
Uhh yes? :'D derp.
I used to do nothing but awesome in MS paint. XD I could make them look painted cool or sprites.
Herpaderp. XD Why do you need to credit me? I hope you don't make them too similar though.

Oji was meant to be Ouji (Prince), but the Japanese dictionary my teacher used was wrong. :c So it means Old. |D I like it.
Old. XDDDDDD is my name.

LOL. Not money XD
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BugsBunnyFanNo1 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wouw! We have so in comon! XD

Nuuu! Don't make me spank you! DX It's beautiful!

Really? I love my ms paint, mostly of the efects o3o diferent brushes, shapes, i feel like using a fancy art program ^^

I'll credit you, but i'll design furniture

LoL, my name means grass ;p

Yeeup. Lots of cash we need to pay

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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not really, many peeps start in that. Only I didn't draw, instead coloured others works quite nicely. It's all prolly lost with all my PC deaths XD Early years.

>:C You can't spank me!
|D I prefer a proper art program, thanx. REAL effects and nicer outcome.

:U Uh lol.
XDDD My own means Lamb or female sheep, a ewe. >.>
XD
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BugsBunnyFanNo1 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:iconscotlandraveplz: I still love MS Paint

It's a free country, i can spank you as much as i want :iconrapefaceplz:

I heard that lambs and sheep are popular in Australia :3
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD I like it, but only when it's done well.

>:C Imma spank you harder!
XD Well yeah, for farms.
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ShadowDagger Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Woah O.O so that's how he got his crystal horn :dummy:. Poor Laz that must hurt a lot :O. Amazing, work at it the shiny effects and the bright turquiose (forgot how to spell that ;A;) give it a brilliant touch :nod: Beautiful work there :D. I like how it sort of blues everything down again XD

What do you mean "baaaaad" its not bad >8U its amazing! its spectacular! its extraordinary! IT IS AN AWESOME-SAUCE COMIC! T'was a good chapter all in all (I know its not over yet XD) nice comedy and fun characters in it. Quiet enjoyable to read :D :hug:
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
bgdshbdvfgbv :'D Only idea that I could think of. Hidden in the rocks, torpedo attack! 8U XDDD Animals tend to bounce back though, or they can deal with more pain then us.
*u* I am far more happy with the future art, horn looks like a true crystal.
XDDD I'm happy you like the feel of this page. :)
^3^ I like how I change the moods too, although sometimes it's poorly. >A>

>8C BAD! Old stuff is always pretty poop to me. XD
fffffffff Not deserving of the praises, no. ):c lol
Daw, I am glad you think so. :'D <333 :U Don't say it's good till you see it end, bwah! I think the ending is *SPOILER CENSOR!*
:T Truthfully it may be nice, but it was all over the place-random almost. XD

QUQ :love: TY.
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