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Atlantis 48 by AuldBlue Atlantis 48 by AuldBlue
:bulletyellow: NEXT >

Whisked away by a bodiless voice the dolphin stays frozen in motion as blue covers his vision, searing pain mingling harmoniously. The words are gentle and strong, coil majestically and whisper to him of things he does not comprehend, the siren demanding as it fades as fast as it has appeared.
Jem, lost within the frenzy has found him and comes to his side, she cannot see that Lazule is still listless to her urgent song and her pleas fall on deaf ears. The news she has to relay is not received, tears fall heavy with anguish, as her pod mate is giving no signal…
From within the haze Lazule can see her but is unable to respond, light dances within his sight, and strange blue marks wrap themselves around the female in a twisted distortion, who flails desperately before him. Her song drowned out by the buzzing of his head.
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“This is your 1st test. BRAVERY.
Defend thy kin.
If he is your brother…
prove to us how much he means to you.”

…Wow that’s kinda cruel. Thanks blue voice.

YAY! Stuff be happening. ;B
Jem kinda just appears, yeah. :I shhhhh. After she vanished lamely and we never saw a peep from her the entire action scene, lol. I am bad planner XD more of said planning at the end of comic.

:’C sorry if the text is unreadable. :/ derp. I still don’t mind though, leaves it hard to read as Lazule hears it waver. Hahah evil fun/mystery fail. I know it should be readable really, halps with story yes. So I failed truthfully, lol.

Blue orbs to show Laz is kinda having a good time in pain land and half not his own sea. C: I shall say no more.

:bulletgreen:GOOD POINTS:
Crystal finally does something. Ohh and I like how it fits into the panel, standing out.
Jem in the last panel and the read sea of horrors <3
:bulletred:BAD POINTS:
The eye effect is so grossly noob ;n; but OTL I even redid it because it was just THAT ugly before. XD
the blue specks are nice, but could be better.
OTL Laz kinda blanks in/out/unconscious because the crystal, again next page, fluctuating consciousness :T but I didn’t mention that too well.
You guys won’t find this page a bore I know, but not much is happening, lacking dynamics. XD plah!
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Atlantis © Warrior-Oji
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:iconcuttieprincess101:
cuttieprincess101 Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
The crystal talking... That is totaly an ecco reference! :)
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It isss, I have little nods towards my fav series, but it's mostly original works. XD
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Duzloo Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Poor Jem :(
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:C Hugs for all the little squishy dolphins.
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Duzloo Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Yes. :/
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BugsBunnyFanNo1 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
J-Jazz... DEAD.... I will seek VENGENCE!!!!!! God, how did i knew he was gonna die? That's magic o3o But....
WHY OJI! WHY!!!!????? Why him not... uhm.... THE WEED!?

Blue light! you will be missed, Jazz
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
/: I woulda thought more would catch on. ... >u> I ain't spolin it.
:T It's not science to know he'd die. lol. Cliche maybe

I did it so that the epic story could really begin, something tragic to set off the horrible mechanics within. He is a cog in the beginning, but also my cherished lil commy. Not a nobody.
An artist must do anything for a good story, that's why they are good, they impact.
/: Having a soppy happy ending is weak-unrealistic, and I hate the sorts.

XD WEED?
Blue light??
Of course my darlin is missed. c':

TY.
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BugsBunnyFanNo1 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Well i hope he will come back somehow he was so... fat... o2o
Oh yah, some people do that :D I hate deaths >:I mostly becouse there's a death in every year of my life, alway's a relative
Happy endings are for children, the world is full of dark and light colors.

Yah know the weed that trolled Laz :icondivaplz:
From the horn :D

NP
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;T I cannot say. Lol, he wasn't fat, just pudgy and his build, short.
I love seeing deaths. They tear at my heart, and I don't care.
:T I dunno many people, so I don't experience that much pain. I've had enough to accept it better, or block it.
LOL. I like darkness.

XD
From the horn?
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BugsBunnyFanNo1 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
He was so stufed o3o Well people are deferent so yah, deaths are wonderful and terible
Mostly my mom's relatives (lots and lots of cousins XD)
I said the line of the world froma text we had to write to our lithuanian class teacher XD

Yeeup
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He wasn't, lol. Just natural anatomy.
D: AW!

O3O
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BugsBunnyFanNo1 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
o3O
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Charanty Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012
Plot thickens!
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:iconauldblue:
AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^3^b Thanks!
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Charanty Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
Welcome)
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D-Thessy Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012
I haven't words for this TvT
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:'DDDD <3 Thanks uber!
I hope the lack of words is a good thing. XD
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zavraan Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Wow. o.o

This looks really amazing! <3 I would react the same way like Gem. :O Oh mai, the crystal is sending a mesage to Lazule? I sense a mysteryyy~ And Lazule has to find out! o3o

Proove me wrong. XD But anyway, great page! I love the lightning! :heart:
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
There is nothing to explain it's pretty much all on the page as you said. Self explanatory, herpaderp. :B
A message Lazule must work with, to prove. But there is more ahead. *u*

:'C Even Jem can't use her smart to get through or avoid this.

XD This tale is all about it <3
Thankies. :)
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zavraan Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Oh I see. ^^;

And I can't wait for the next page! :la:
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD

Next weeek. <3
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zavraan Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
:'D
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ShadowDagger Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OH MAI 8O!!

All the shiny blueness O.O must touch it! :noes:

I don't see what you find wrong in Laz's eye effects, it works quite well in the said situation if you ask me. Oh cool, old English 8'D I can readeth it, thou shan't worryeth C: that's a nice touch to the situation as well.

Aww, Jem :( we would be in tears too :huggle:. Great page, this is really getting interesting :O

I'm making your B-day giftie, might take awhile but I will get it done as soon as I can <3
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
8'D The comic will drown you in blue. XD I have fallen that way already. ouob

It's choppyyyy and sits badly >_>; Many things I can grasp. Better planning could have made the angle and effect work. :'C If he was drawn better, I find him kinda silly. XD
BAW! OL' ENGLSIH :iconfyeahplz: I love it. XD
:I If you can read it then I won't worry. XD Also thank you for telling me that. /: Unless you viewed the description part in tiny writings. XD
I rather liked it spiking to life with a voice in the water/Laz head A bit late, but it still makes it work > Laz can defend his friends death <3

:'C She was smart to avoid, but it is still costly.
:love: U. :3

Eee Don't feel guilty. Veggielove is quite the same, and I love you guys still plan to go through with it.^^ :heart:
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AlexRaccoonGlider Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
NO WAY! HE's DEAD!? What is this story going to unveil us next??
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
X'D It was pretty obvious the lad wasn't going to make a comeback. :'C
LOTS OF STUFF C8 <3
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AlexRaccoonGlider Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
May he rest in peace...
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nah, he gonna parteh. XDb
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Mokuoo Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
PFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF KILLING JAZZ! YOU SHOULD BE ASHAMED! *le slap* YOU KILLED YOUR BABEH! *slap again* HOW DO YOU SLEEP AT NIGHT! *ze slap* I HOPE YOU HAVE NIGHTMARE FILLED DREAMS OF JAZZ EVERY NIGHT! *LE FALCON PUNCH!*

LOL, love the facial expression I give you brownie points! +5 brownie points! lol, ver nicely done love the last panel expression <3 <3 *falls in le love with it* :'V so bootifool XD

KEEP UP THE GOOD DARN WORK!
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LMFAO! RAGING HARD <3
Well for a time I felt really bad, I STILL DO. But I love my baby and I've heard the expression "kill your darlings" and stuff :I An artist loves their babies will be able to let them go <3 I am a sadistic bitch. ^_^
Don't mean I cannot make more lulz out of comic with my babies c: I miss him too much. :c I felt guilty the entire time before this. shh. But no nightmares XD

D: I hate these old drawings, they le terribellz.
8'V Thank you, sweet.

I AM >:C WE ARE INTO THE HUNDREDS NAO. 135 to be exact. 8I
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Mokuoo Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Rage GRAAAAAAAAH <333

D'aw :D I'm glad you love your phins :) and don't just aimlessly throw them around! <3

LOL GUILT WILL SET YOU FREE! Lol said that so wrong XD

AND YOUR WELCOMES!
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:T Oh hell no, I don't like random crap happening, love all my babies > Even the nobodies and villains. x-x Although I derp at times.

XDDDDDDDDDDD It was cracktastic tho.

ouo
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Mokuoo Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Lol, I was searching in your gallery and someone likes dat sem there Jareth (labyrinth) XD

LOL, "random crap happening" sounds like something I would say XD haha and yush LOVE YOUR BABIES!!
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ROFL! I DO. >:C Gotta problem??? I like HIM, not his pants OTL

Bahaha! Noo,I am already getting into your head. ;D beware I have these curse'd powers. *u*
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Mokuoo Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
LAWL, I love the movie labyrinth XD it's flippen funneh as hell! poor Jareth rejected so many times even after all the music and dancing :'D put yes Team Jareth ftw! lawl I can't believe I used twilight ref. kill me.

LAWL MY HEAD NUUUU! *flails and foams*
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AW-EEE! C': I like the folklore behind it and stuff. dance magic and songs. Bowie XDDDDDD That was rather sad, yeah.
NP X'D I love team J-fea. :B Still, reference to that is blegh! XD
Need more movies like it. :'C
:stab:

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I will look into your future ~*u*~ <3
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Averant Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow.. That' just.. I mean I.. Yow! What a panel! Lotta weirdness going on there. But the art is brilliant! :D

Great job, Oji-Oji!
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:'D NOPE. ALL THE NOES OJI DOES SAY.
I will have you implode with future stuff then if you like this so much. :I Silly Cardo. XD <3

TY.
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Averant Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol! XD
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