Whisked away by a bodiless voice the dolphin stays frozen in motion as blue covers his vision, searing pain mingling harmoniously. The words are gentle and strong, coil majestically and whisper to him of things he does not comprehend, the siren demanding as it fades as fast as it has appeared.
Jem, lost within the frenzy has found him and comes to his side, she cannot see that Lazule is still listless to her urgent song and her pleas fall on deaf ears. The news she has to relay is not received, tears fall heavy with anguish, as her pod mate is giving no signal…
From within the haze Lazule can see her but is unable to respond, light dances within his sight, and strange blue marks wrap themselves around the female in a twisted distortion, who flails desperately before him. Her song drowned out by the buzzing of his head.
--- “This is your 1st test. BRAVERY.
Defend thy kin.
If he is your brother…
prove to us how much he means to you.”
…Wow that’s kinda cruel. Thanks blue voice.
YAY! Stuff be happening. ;B
Jem kinda just appears, yeah. :I shhhhh.
After she vanished lamely and we never saw a peep from her the entire action scene, lol. I am bad planner XD more of said planning at the end of comic.
:’C sorry if the text is unreadable. :/ derp. I still don’t mind though, leaves it hard to read as Lazule hears it waver.
Hahah evil fun/mystery fail. I know it should be readable really, halps with story yes. So I failed truthfully, lol.
Blue orbs to show Laz is kinda having a good time in pain land and half not his own sea. C: I shall say no more.
Crystal finally does something. Ohh and I like how it fits into the panel, standing out.
Jem in the last panel and the read sea of horrors <3
The eye effect is so grossly noob ;n; but OTL I even redid it because it was just THAT ugly before. XD
the blue specks are nice, but could be better.
OTL Laz kinda blanks in/out/unconscious because the crystal, again next page, fluctuating consciousness :T but I didn’t mention that too well.
You guys won’t find this page a bore I know, but not much is happening, lacking dynamics. XD plah!
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