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Atlantis 49 by AuldBlue Atlantis 49 by AuldBlue
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Darkness enfolds our cursed one as he hovers in place, the energy before returns; bubbles vibrant are expelled past him with light reaching his dormant form.
Not at all dealing well with the death of 2 friends, her thoughts echo aloud and Jem makes a life decision to find help, abandoning the traumatic hell and her brothers she races to find the wise one, her skills of reason are at once handy, keeping her level headed.

And not so level because she didn’t check lazule properly for life. Lol. Give the girls a break c’: she still thinks enough to get the Elder.
:bulletgreen:GOOD POINTS:
Lighting/bubbles
Shiny horn
:’C feel the sads.

:bulletred:BAD POINTS:
Jem looks herpaderpin and terrible. I mostly dislike the bottom one. Poorly drawn and anatomies lol
Laz isn’t any better. Lol the light and pose. Cliché >_>; although I love the lighting/bubbles
His horn is tiny :’D ffffff Wow it changes sizes in future and looks crap, lmao! I can see why fail.
Yellow eye markings DX
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Atlantis© Warrior-Oji
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:iconduzloo:
Duzloo Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Favourite panel is the first one. Sleepy dolphin looks weird and interesting and strangely scary. *pokes it*
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Naw, Duz thank you!^^ Lol creepy. XD Pfft, dun poke. that's mean.
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Duzloo Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
You're welcome <3
Pokey poke. He won't notice that anyways, he's too squishy. XD
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XDDDD Baw! Squishy... more like unconscious lol.
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Duzloo Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
I imagine him as a kind of rubber squiggly thing XD
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOLOL <3

I think stupid things are more Jazz though. :giggle:
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Duzloo Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
:XD:
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D-Thessy Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
I love the effects and the background *v*
I can't wait to see the rest :dance:
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*o* Thankies D. <333 I think cI can do way better now. :'D

cx Awww.
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BugsBunnyFanNo1 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
*sight* i'm gonna tell him what my mom says:
"Wake up Laz, or elce you will be late for school!"
Don't say that about Jem >:I She's awsume! i say that al the time
Everything looks so diferent when you comment in bed ;p
Who's the "Elder"? o3o Another dolphin LoL
God dangit!? Why you draw Laz floating in the air so good!?
My brain: "in water" not in "the air"
Me: who cairs anywhay

Still can't believe fat pants deid .-. He was so... Fat pants
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;T I think you mean *sigh* > a breath of air expelled. Sight = eyes. :I

He's kinda not gonna wake up, being he is unconscious. Laz has no school so that's kinda pointless. /:

:T She may be, but she looks stupid. I drew her badly, nothing to do with awesome, BBFN1. :T I have every right to nitpick my comic, SO I can make it BETTER. =-= It's how crit works.
Uhhh? In bed?
Yes, we met Elder pages ago, about page 30?

XDDD He's not in air, just drifting in the water... and it's baaad D| Real cheesy. ;T
LOL.

:T That's kinda rude to call him that. He has no pants, and he's not fat. :I
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yesss. :I All words have a difference, even if they're the same meaning but spelt different. Sight and sight do not though.

My own said that when I used to go to school. :T But it's useless.

/: Whatever you wish, but you shouldn't demand things, she's my character. It's uber rude to tell others how to do anything with their story. :I

I don't like it. :I

lol. Commies are round-small, but not fatter than any other dolphin.
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BugsBunnyFanNo1 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I didn't kneew that!? But my speling is so cr*ptastic!

School is like my second home, the situations are the same .-.

Jem is a very nice character, i know that! The story is good, i'm not saying anything wrong about it ^^;

I don't like mushrooms :la:

Commies? What's that? o3o
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD LOL. You should know that.
XO

I know. You are getting it wrong though, I like the character, but I draw her badly. :/

;T

Commersons dolphin. Is what Jazz is, I told you.
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BugsBunnyFanNo1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
My OC are hard to draw .-.

So many dolpins @.@
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:T Better to keep them simple then.

Well yeah.
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zavraan Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
LAZULE! WAKE UP! * tries to jump through the computer screen * IT DOESN'T WORK! :icontearplz:

Dramatic time is dramatic! o3o I wonder what's gonna happen next. o.o Yeah. I would look weird too if this happens to me. XD lol
But I agree with you, love the bubbles. :heart:

Can't wait for the next page! :D
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD NOPE! DREAMY LAND <3

LOL. >_> Over drama cheez. :B
Only time will tell u3u

XD I know you look funny when you pull faces, but I just dislike it alll. =-=
TY C:

: D
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zavraan Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Dreamland. It's so beautifulll o3o

XD

lol
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's not shown yet. *u*
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zavraan Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
:O :la:
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ShadowDagger Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lazule :noes:......
Wake up! :nuu: WAKE UUUUP!! D8 *pokes him with a stick* wake up, please? :c

First panel is nice and tranquil :) I like how Laz has that aura of 'the chosen one' like atmosphere :nod: Lighting and the bubbles good touch there :D Especially love how you did the rays there :O it looks magical.

Swim Jem! Swiiiim!
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:'D He can't, I sad.
LMAO! Sticks. XD

I like that ethereal effect, but it's also kinda cheesy 'chosen 1', which I no like. XD
It's nice, but also not. XD My bubbles have entirely changed unless large types. I draw tiny and so many nao. XD
I wanted that magical effect, but it now looks kinda blegh, ahah!
Thanks so much Shadow.^^

;u; Swim gal.
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DawnSentinel Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
Lol, I thought the horn was right in his blowhole.
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I kinda had a good lol, so did Squishy. ;D

TY. XD
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DawnSentinel Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
Hehe, no prob.
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Mokuoo Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Poor laz ;u;! lawl, love the coloring job, the bubbles are awesome :D <3
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:'D
XO I think it looks sloppy-nooby :B Kinda like and dislike. XD

Daw <333
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AlexRaccoonGlider Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This comic definatly has a strong gravity here o.O
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AuldBlue Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw thanks!^^ I feel it could be heaps better, you'll see that, later. :)
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